WALT: show not tell.
I will begin by describing what the characters body felt like.
I will describe what they were thinking
I will leave the audience hanging
Her heart was racing, her legs where wobbling, her teeth where rattling, her arms were fuled with goosebumps, her face went red like a apple,her lips were dry And purple as grapes, she was biting her fingers,just amgen what will happen next……
What do you like about my writing ?