Friday, 31 October 2014

Wednesday 29th October 2014

WALT: Show not tell.

She had shiny new clothing bright and sparkling shoes.
Her hair was long purple and black silk and thin.
Her face was as soft as a baby’s skin.
She had a dimple  on her left cheek.
She was  20 years old, but up close she looked 15.
She felt amused and happy and good about herself.
She had peach skin color.
She had a voice like a famous person.

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